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Post by tommy2071 on Dec 16, 2007 0:46:49 GMT -5
I hope poems are ok, too! Its a Kataang poem. Its based on the DOBS Kiss except for the last one which is kinda a maybe future.
He looks at her with eyes so bold Hoping he won't change his mind He knows its time for him to go But those three little words are hard to find
She looks at him, her eyes so shy With her heart beating fast She knows its time to say goodbye WHen those three little words could be their last
He doesn't know where to begin To tell her his heart of loving bliss He looks up into eyes again And says those three little words in a loving kiss
With a heart of passion and fire She wishes he wouldn't go away With one last look of loves desire She hopes those three little words will find its way
They now look back and remember the kiss When the power of love was so brand new They know their hearts will never remiss Those three little words, I love you
-Tommy2071
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Post by olihaynes on Dec 16, 2007 6:10:40 GMT -5
wow! your a fantastic writer!! i hope you write some more
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Post by pokemonlovergrl on Dec 20, 2007 11:29:44 GMT -5
Your poems are so much better than mine! ohwell
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Post by Lain on Dec 21, 2007 11:53:20 GMT -5
*bows down to Tommy* That great piece of work was a gift from the heavens. In other words, you rule!!
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Post by pokemonlovergrl on Jan 21, 2008 19:52:38 GMT -5
You have to be really good to impress Lain-chan, She supports zutara!! LOL
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